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Spooky Poetry – Naoise

Halloween by Pedro J. Ferreira
Halloween, a photo by Pedro J. Ferreira on Flickr.
With Halloween on the horizon, we have been thinking up some eerie poetry in our recent Little Green Pig Workshops. Our Piglets (ages 7-11) group have been using rhyme and repetition to create a really spooky, Halloween-inspired atmosphere in their writing. The result? Spine-chilling! 

 

Here is “Midnight” by Naoise:

 

At 10.45 two children were out,

Daring each other as they went about,

One was a boy and one was a girl

And their dares were enough to make anyone curl.

 

At 10.50 the boy, the girl he dared,

To go to the forest where everyone was scared

And the girl did not refuse,

For if she did wimp she would be accused.

 

At 11.00 she went in,

To that place were there was not any din,

And a spirit she saw that scared her so,

A dreadful man who’s face did not show.

 

At 11.10 the boy heard her screams

And he came in to see something from his scariest dreams,

A man with a knife all dripping and red,

But he knew he was not in his safe warm bed.

 

At 11.25 they saw a house,

The forest was as silent as a mouse,

Then a cackling broke through the night,

Giving them both a horrible fright.

 

At 11.30 they went through the doors,

Both their breathing and voices were hoarse,

Ghosts filled the rooms, there was no way of escape,

As much as they ran nothing went away.

 

At 11.45 they reached the top,

Soon these ghosts would have to stop,

But try as they might they just wouldn’t go,

They had to capture this unwanted foe.

 

At 11.55 they were surrounded

Nothing would stop ghosts, they’d flatten people to the ground,

And the boy and the girl were in it together

How long ’til they got out?

 

Midnight: Never.

 

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The real me – Sian

Night Sky by jhuff6
Night Sky, a photo by jhuff6 on Flickr.

We’ve been writing about ourselves and the ‘real me’ in our recent writing workshops. In our Saddlebacks group for 12 to 18 year olds we had five minute writing bursts  that answered questions about ourselves and our lives. Here’s Sian’s response to ‘Where’s your favourite place in your home?’

‘In my home I like the windows that open wide over large drops. I like to stand and look out, hear and smell the city, wonder how far the fall is. I like to perch on a sill not meant to be seat and watch the night sky while shivering. It makes me feel spiritual and alive and small. And sometimes, when I sit there with all my thoughts jittering out in the thick chilling air, I forget to care about what’s fair and unfair, and for the minute I’m just htere, with that great expanse of bluish black and the stars.’

Isn’t that beautiful? What’s your favourite spot in your home and why? Leave your answer in the comments.

If you would like to join our Saddlebacks writing workshops, we currently meet once a month at Brighton Youth Centre. FInd out more on our workshops & events page.

 

 

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The real me – Naoise the alien

Untitled by littlegreenpig
Untitled, a photo by littlegreenpig on Flickr.

Following on from Eva revealing her true identity, her is Naoise’s story of who she is and where she comes from. She may look like a normal nine year old girl (see photo above) but do you have any idea what she really is? Read on to find out…

‘I’m kind of alien. I mean, I look like a normal human being but I’m not. I was born in the secret depths of a planet called Critlien. It’s quite close to Pluto, the dwarf planet, and we’re lucky humans haven’t discovered it yet. I was christened with the na,e Lenkandomondi and I looked like any other baby on the planet so my alien parents set me to school by the time I was 107. Just one thing  - us aliens grow up quicker than humans and 107 is really young for us! But I was a disappointment. Yes, I could do all the norma alien stuff like dividing and multiplying (things, not numbers). But I couldn’t do proper alien things like making things disappear purely by thinking about them and making things levitate by tapping them exactly 29 times. So the teachers decided I would only be good for one thing – spying.

This meant I had to go down to earth with a team of other aliens (which the the earthlings call my family) and get information from humans about earth. I had to change my name to Naoise because Lenkandomondi was just too odd for a human. So after about, say, 75 years of preparing, we went down. It was odd. The ground was covered with little green lines and there was a muddy blue splishy thing at the edge of the land. The end of the world’s what I call it.’

What did you think of Naoise’s story? Leave us a comment. Or let us know who the ‘real you’ is…

 

 

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The real me – Eva the fire girl

fire girl by chant0m0
fire girl, a photo by chant0m0 on Flickr.
We kicked off our Saturday workshops last month writing about ourselves and each other. In the Piglets group, for writers aged 7 to 9 years, we wrote about the ‘real us’. Eva may look like a normal 7 year old girl, but did you know who she really is? Here’s her story:

Fire girl

I was born in the sun and I live on the earth. My job is a secret spy. I am spying on my little sister because she is trying to take all of my super powers away. My real name is Fire girl instead of Eva. My super powers are being invisible and turning into flames. My parents died because they were bitten by a crocodile on the legs and then eaten up by a dragon in Australia.

Great story, Eva. We look forward to seeing you turn into flames at our next workshop!

If you would be interested in coming along to any of our writing workshops, find out more at our workshops & events page.

 

 

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Your chance to be a published restaurant critic!

The Restaurant Critic by Artbytephoto
The Restaurant Critic, a photo by Artbytephoto on Flickr.

 

Do you love eating out at cafes and restaurants? Here’s your chance to showcase your writing and reviewing skills and be included in a glossy magzine! Sussex foodie magazine ‘Grub’ is looking for a young reviewer to write up a short review about somewhere they’ve eaten in Sussex recently. You need to write 200 words about what you ate, plus add in:

  • a family friendly rating out of 5
  • if the waiting staff patient
  • if there were highchairs
  • if there were baby changing facilities
  • the prices of the dishes you had
  • the names and ages of people who went with you to the restaraunt

You also need to include a recent head and shoulders pic of you to run alongside your review, as well as your age and hometown. If you think you’re up to the challenge, please get in touch with Aline Tanner, Sussex editor of ‘Grub’ magazine at sussexeditor@grubmagazine.co.uk or phone 07912303237. Remember to mention you’re from Little Green Pig.
 

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Tuesday & Saturday workshops back up and running for autumn

Discussion by littlegreenpig

 

 

Our Saturday writing workshops in Brighton & Hove have started again for autumn – come and join us!  We have the Piglets group for 7 to 9 year olds and the Spots group for 9 to 11 year olds which run twice a month on Saturday mornings. We also have our Saddlebacks group for teens that runs on Tuesdays at Brighton Youth Centre. Spread the word and come and join in! Details of times and locations can be found on our website.

 

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Tasting the rainbow at our Summer Open Mic

Web Saddlebacks open mic

Thank you to everyone who made it down to our Summer Open Mic night. Weren’t our performers great? ‘Tasting the rainbow’ was a great piece performed by Circe, one of our youngest writers, who gave us a brilliant performance and really came alive on stage. Here is a guest post from our volunteer Katie, (who you might have met on the door or at one of our workshops) giving us her review of the night:

Finally last week I got the chance to see all the Piglets in action, reading their stories, poems and plays to family and friends. I was amazed at how comfortable all of them seemed on stage, and even the shyest stepped forward to take the limelight. Invokal was a fantastic host and a great inspiration for the performers.

My favourite performances were the group poems, because I saw these from their conception right through to the Open Mic. The first groups poem, ‘I am’, has a real sense of fun and boastfulness, as each line makes a more outlandish claim. The second, ‘Tonight at Noon’, was very different but just as eerie as the first is funny. The premise was to turn events on their head as in the Adrian Hendri poem… so the Piglets came up with lines such as ‘Tonight at noon the scary movie watches you’ and ‘Tonight at noon the curtains pull you apart’. Terrifying, I think you’ll agree!

As for individual performances, I thought Naoise’s poem ‘Jealousy’ brilliantly captured a very complex emotion; and Stani’s ‘Wynne’s Mews’ could certainly give Lewis Carroll a run for his money in the Jabberwocky stakes.

Having not met the Saddlebacks before, I was so impressed with the standard of their writing. Well done to everyone involved, the night was a great success and I can’t wait to come back after the August break to see what everyone’s been writing during their summer holidays!

For more photos from the night, see our Flickr group.

Please leave a comment telling us what you thought of the night too!

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A poem for Fathers’ Day

Here is a poem by William, who comes to our Saturday workshops, about his dad. Isn’t it great? Maybe you could write a poem for your dad on Fathers’ Day. What could be a better present.

My Dad

My dad, the best sculptor,
could enter a sculpting contest
would dig up an ancient Samaran pit with joy.

My dad likes woollen tops,
makes fantastic food like pasta,
knows everything about history.

My dad can make a cardboard tree
does Chi Gung (a martial art)
and likes music a lot.

My dad knows what’s right for the world
wants to become a teacher
hates haggis (and I agree).

My dad knows when things are true or not.
I can’t think of anything more
but it’s clear that he’s the best dad in the world.
(And that’s saying something.)

 

 

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Ready for a poetry Competition?

Here’s a fantastic opportunity for young poets to enter the Foyle Young Poet of the Year Award, run by the Poetry Society. You need to be aged 11 – 17 to enter and can enter as many poems as you like, although the judges advise you spend time re-drafting your work and only send in your very best. There are some amazing prizes on offer, including having your work published in an official winner’s anthology and attending prestigious courses and ceremonies. You can see all the details for entering at http://www.poetrysociety.org.uk/content/competitions/fyp/. You’ve got until 31st July and can enter online. Good luck and let us know if you’re entering!

Lucy

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Flower Words

I love this time of the year. Hopefully you’ve noticed the incredible green of the trees and the proud blush of colours from the flowers in our parks and gardens. In our Saddlebacks session the other day, we used the word ‘FLOWER’ for a warm-up writing exercise. We had to find as many words as we could that could be created from the letters in that word. We then selected three of them and made twenty-word quick stories from them. We came up with some very interesting results!

What words can you find in ‘FLOWER’? Can you spot any animals? Post us your comments!

Lucy

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